Little something i put together

[NightsDragon]

Dang Vlad, you need to make you a thread and keep writing. Those are awesome. Very good imagry

[VladTaltos]

and heres one i wrote when my gold fish Jaws died


Death, feared by most, Loved by others, but how do you fear something you know nothing about? or is it not knowing that scares people? I sit in my room questioning life, wishing for death. A rayzor lays in my hand hungrey for blood, I press its eg in to my skin then with one quick slice the blood begins to flow , again and again I let the rayzor fly, till the blood runs down my arm like a rushing river, The color is so beautiful, The pain in full of pleasure, I feel my body slowly weakening, As my lofe poors from the open cute, In this moment I belong.

[CharleHu$$tle]

Hey the Competion was for righting it write now off the top of your head.

No originality

[NightsDragon]

very deep, but is sad and therefore not as fulfilling. Do you have anything that would encourage a smile instead of a tear?

[VladTaltos]

this is a poem i wrote for a girl i liked but she didnt like it so maybe you will

Maybe someday, that I can open to you, and say all the
feelings, I know to be true. Maybe this day, You'll give me your heart, Instead just seeing you tear mine apart. Maybe tomorrow, I'll find my true self to tell you, you mean more to me than anyone else. Maybe you'll love me for all I am, not what I look like for that, I'd be damned. Maybe this day you will kiss me for hours, to hold you in my arms and feel love's true power. Maybe this power, will conquer everything, then I will know, what your love brings. But until then my eyes wont be dry, because every night, I stay up and cry. But I now know, that these tears just bring pain, that all of my efforts, have been in vein. Maybe you'll hate me, and despise my voice too, but no matter what, I will always love you. You bring me joy, unparralled love, and I know that these feelings, only come from above. you are my angel, my very best friend, I will always love you, my friend till the end. But until the day, I can open to you, all I can do, is pray for you. Maybe someday, that I can open to you, and say all the feelings I know to be true.

[VladTaltos]

and another one for a girl she didnt like it

Come closer and look deeply into my eyes, Tell me I'm the only one, That keeps your heart alive. Sometimes I feel so alone and so afraid, The fear of lonliness grips me, And your cold hand and soul walk me to my grave. I hold out my hands, Look at the Crimson Pain, I Bleed For You Now My Love, But would you do the same? A little closer now look deeper into my eyes, Can you see the death in them? My soul drowning in lies. Sometimes I feel so cold without no chance of warmth, I stand alone in this Dark Void, To brave your frigid storm. I hold out my heart, Watch it beat in pain, Piece by piece I Bleed For You, You wouldn't do the same. So now take my story my Love, Take it with you through time, I Bleed For You Eternally, And I now give you my life.

[NightsDragon]

Wow, had to sit there for a moment. If that girl didn't like it then she has no taste and is blinder than a worm under a spot light...

I think it's absolutely beautiful. You ever hear of authorsden.com? you should post some there, let the author's world comment and gain from it. Plus then ppl can read it anytime they wish.

[VladTaltos]

That means alot to me

[NightsDragon]

You read your work, you must realize that it is very good. You definetly have talent.

[VladTaltos]

i Read it but i thought it was crap

[CharleHu$$tle]

Good writing man

[VladTaltos]

Thanks Chu$$