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Post by Ahnemesis on Nov 5, 2003 17:27:21 GMT -5
Heres your poem C$,
-----Untitled---
Do I take just one more chance,
throwing caution to the wind?
To fall into the arms I know,
to taste so sweet a sin.
Or should I run with fear in mind,
the warnings of old, anew?
Knowing danger lies within,
if I enter into you.
Close my eyes, my decision made,
your arms close around.
No turning back, no safety net,
to you I am forever bound.
Without a sound I follow you,
my loss of self your gain.
Knowing within the trap in your arms,
I will never be the same.
-------Ahnemesis---
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Post by CharleHu$$tle on Nov 6, 2003 12:50:09 GMT -5
Well I can say that your poem is very honest and very Emotional. Truelly Haert Felt also. As for the Poem it si truelly Beautiful. As for the Underline Meaning. Well that can be discussed behind closed doors
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Post by Ahnemesis on Nov 6, 2003 15:48:12 GMT -5
lol, I'm sure it can.
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Post by CharleHu$$tle on Nov 6, 2003 17:07:08 GMT -5
And We Need to sound proof the room
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Post by Ahnemesis on Nov 9, 2003 16:42:40 GMT -5
I'll ignore that one. Be good C$!
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Post by CharleHu$$tle on Nov 10, 2003 13:00:24 GMT -5
Good Be Good Sorry Honey But I am great Not Good
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Post by Ahnemesis on Dec 5, 2003 14:28:40 GMT -5
I'll just bet you are C.Money The Heart To Win... How many times have I tried, To wait for you to change? Giving away the dreams I had, in hopes that you would stay. Something in me needed you, the woman, the girl, the slave. Torn apart by bitterness, I clung to what you gave. I had no idea the things ahead, what the future would demand. The pain, the rage, the sacrifice, against the storm I would have to stand. But you gave it one shot after another, and I took it all on the chin. Hoping one day you would see the truth, of the heart here you stood to win. But you played too long the game of yours, my heart is no longer free. For it resides in my hands now, and who holds it is up to me. -------Ahnemesis---
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