My character... help please?

[Merkuri]

Okay, here's Gargoyle with her totem points redistributed. Any more advice?

Oh, and I see some folks have merits/flaws. Should I try and find a couple of those or would it be too much trouble since I don't have a book?

Attributes
Physical (secondary)
Strength 3
Dexterity 2
Stamina 3

Social (tertiary)
Charisma 4
Manipulation 1
Appearance 1

Mental (primary)
Perception 2
Intelligence 4
Wits 4

Abilities
Talents (secondary)
Alertness 2
Athletics 3
Brawl 2
Dodge 1
Empathy
Expression
Intimidation
Primal-Urge
Streetwise 3
Subterfuge

Knowledges (primary)
Computer 1
Enigmas 2
Investigation 2
Law 1
Linguistics 2
Medicine 1
Occult
Politics 1
Rituals
Science 3

Skills (tertiary)
Animal Ken
Crafts
Drive
Etiquette
Firearms
Leadership
Melee 2
Performance 1
Stealth 2
Survival 2

Background
Allies
Contacts 2
Fetish
Kinfolk 1
Mentor 4
Past Life
Resources
Pure Breed
Rites
Totem

Gifts
Persuasion
Mindspeak
Cooking

Renown
Glory (2P/0T)
Wisdom (1P/0T)
Honor (0P/0T)

Rage 4
Gnosis 1
Willpower 4

Freebies: 1 Dexterity, 2 Brawl, 2 Melee, 1 Kinfolk, 1 Mentor

[Wyrmfire]

Gargoyle looks great, Merk. Now all we need is a game to put her in...

It's really up to you. I discussed this with Jayce a little while ago, but check out his Yahoo! group in the advertising forum- it has, among other nifty things, a nice list of merits and flaws. It's for mage, but most of them are adaptable.

Don't feel obligated to get any, though. It's really just to add some substance and uniqueness to your character if you think she needs it.

[Merkuri]

I think I'll leave off flaws/merits. Might as well keep my first character simple. Off she goes to the official character's list!