Post by Tellyna on Oct 12, 2003 14:04:42 GMT -5
This is the start of one of my many books, I would really like to know what you think about my little work in progress. Feel free to comment and give sugestions. And if you like it, I'll keep adding to it. ;D
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“Mitchelle!” Leah called as she banged on the bathroom door, “How long does it take to get ready? For crying out loud!”
“Shut up! I’m almost done!” Mitchelle screamed at her younger sister as she dried her wet hands on the blue towel hanging on the bar next to the sink. The smell of her jasmine perfume wafted under the door, causing Leah to gag.
“Lovely perfume, must you marinate in it?” She coughed as Krye, the youngest of the siblings, rounded the corner from her room.
“Are you two fighting over the bathroom again?” She said as she leaned on the wall next to Leah, her long blond hair braided into a long ponytail reaching to the center of her back.
Leah tossed her shoulder length blond hair from her eyes as she glared at her younger sister. “No, we didn’t even get to fight over it, it was my turn to go first and she just locked the door on me!”
“Mitch! Hurry up and get out of the bathroom before Leah drives us all insane!” Nathanial shouted as he banged his fist on the door. Krye looked up at her older brother and smirked, she had to admit, he had grown a lot since the beginning of the school year. He was away at college most of the time, but still found ways to spend what little time he could spare with his younger sisters. His black hair was up in blue tipped spikes, as usual he must have used at least half a bottle of gel, or so it seemed.
Krye was giggling at her brother’s comment when suddenly; a tall, lanky, six foot eleven inch body had her pinned to the wall. “Nat!” She squealed as he chuckled and unpinned his youngest sibling. Krye jumped out from behind the door as Mitchelle swung it open and stepped out, her long blond hair in a pony tail reaching her shoulders, and light sky blue eyeliner lining her ice blue eyes. Leah grinned as she pushed past her older sister and slammed the bathroom door shut. After waiting for half the morning to take her shower, she wasn’t about to let this chance pass her by.
“Leah! I wasn’t finished!” Mitchelle screamed as she banged her fist on the door.
“God… I’m surprised that darn door hasn’t busted in from you females hitting it all the time.” Nathanial commented dryly as Krye shot him a look.
“Hey! I resent that!” Leah shouted from inside the bathroom as Nathanial rolled his eyes.
“Oh please, you were going all postal on me yesterday when you were getting ready for your date with Dean.” He pointed out as sky groaned and walked down the hall, heading to her room.
“I didn’t need the bathroom anyway.” Mitchelle said as she snobbishly stuck her nose in the air and walked off. Nathanial rolled his eyes once more.
“Honestly, after seventeen years of this you’d think I’d be used to it.” He commented as he stuck his hands into the massive pockets of his baggy black jeans and leaned against the cream colored wall.
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“Mitchelle!” Leah called as she banged on the bathroom door, “How long does it take to get ready? For crying out loud!”
“Shut up! I’m almost done!” Mitchelle screamed at her younger sister as she dried her wet hands on the blue towel hanging on the bar next to the sink. The smell of her jasmine perfume wafted under the door, causing Leah to gag.
“Lovely perfume, must you marinate in it?” She coughed as Krye, the youngest of the siblings, rounded the corner from her room.
“Are you two fighting over the bathroom again?” She said as she leaned on the wall next to Leah, her long blond hair braided into a long ponytail reaching to the center of her back.
Leah tossed her shoulder length blond hair from her eyes as she glared at her younger sister. “No, we didn’t even get to fight over it, it was my turn to go first and she just locked the door on me!”
“Mitch! Hurry up and get out of the bathroom before Leah drives us all insane!” Nathanial shouted as he banged his fist on the door. Krye looked up at her older brother and smirked, she had to admit, he had grown a lot since the beginning of the school year. He was away at college most of the time, but still found ways to spend what little time he could spare with his younger sisters. His black hair was up in blue tipped spikes, as usual he must have used at least half a bottle of gel, or so it seemed.
Krye was giggling at her brother’s comment when suddenly; a tall, lanky, six foot eleven inch body had her pinned to the wall. “Nat!” She squealed as he chuckled and unpinned his youngest sibling. Krye jumped out from behind the door as Mitchelle swung it open and stepped out, her long blond hair in a pony tail reaching her shoulders, and light sky blue eyeliner lining her ice blue eyes. Leah grinned as she pushed past her older sister and slammed the bathroom door shut. After waiting for half the morning to take her shower, she wasn’t about to let this chance pass her by.
“Leah! I wasn’t finished!” Mitchelle screamed as she banged her fist on the door.
“God… I’m surprised that darn door hasn’t busted in from you females hitting it all the time.” Nathanial commented dryly as Krye shot him a look.
“Hey! I resent that!” Leah shouted from inside the bathroom as Nathanial rolled his eyes.
“Oh please, you were going all postal on me yesterday when you were getting ready for your date with Dean.” He pointed out as sky groaned and walked down the hall, heading to her room.
“I didn’t need the bathroom anyway.” Mitchelle said as she snobbishly stuck her nose in the air and walked off. Nathanial rolled his eyes once more.
“Honestly, after seventeen years of this you’d think I’d be used to it.” He commented as he stuck his hands into the massive pockets of his baggy black jeans and leaned against the cream colored wall.