Greghoul
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Post by Greghoul on Jun 29, 2004 1:51:36 GMT -5
My mind is torn, my body tired
from this world, I'm to expire
my soul needs rest, but I dare not take
lest one good deed, I dare forsake
this little peice I came up with in my spare time. It symbolises my life as of the past few days. Please, tell me what you think of it and after a bit I'll tell you the story about it.........
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Greghoul
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Post by Greghoul on Jul 1, 2004 23:53:12 GMT -5
I take it from lack of posts that no one cares? thats always my luck  |
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Post by Sight on Jul 2, 2004 8:12:24 GMT -5
Or it could be that not many have signed on since its posting.
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Greghoul
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Post by Greghoul on Jul 2, 2004 10:17:35 GMT -5
yes, you may be right. but the few that have looked at the topic have definatly ignored me........
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Post by Sight on Jul 2, 2004 21:17:31 GMT -5
I for one did not wish to comment as I am not too terribly good at judging poetry or the meaning behind it, so often I leave it to the more poetic and insightful to deal with such issues.
My apologies if it seems I do not care, I do, but as I said, I leave such things to those more capable at them.
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Greghoul
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Post by Greghoul on Jul 2, 2004 23:29:42 GMT -5
actualy I'd preffer any and all critisisum. please, post what this makes you feel ;D
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Post by LadyWinterWolf on Jul 3, 2004 2:41:07 GMT -5
It needs more to it.......why are you tired? What has transpired.
Expire? Is this a suicide poem? Is this a, "I'm tired of this world, so I wanna die" poem.
You want input......I think we need more than 4 lines to get the gist of what you want to say.
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Greghoul
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Post by Greghoul on Jul 3, 2004 12:25:44 GMT -5
Sorry, I was tied because I spent 3 days strait without any sleep, and I mean NO sleep. Suicide poem? Yes, but let me explain...... I've been up for 3 days talking to a nice group of girls in Wisconsin over IM. I've talked to them before, but not like this. When this started the girls got a web cam and teased me with they're good looks.  after a while one of the girls asked if I had a web cam or a pic I could send. I didn't and she got really mad and cut her wrist. She bleed really bad dropped to the floor and stopped moving. But that's not the worst of it! when she hit the floor 3 other girls grabbed things and cut they're wrists. I begged the other 2 the where left to help them but they said no because those girls were in a Death Chain. (for those of you who dont know, a Death Chain is a pact you make with some people to kill yourself if someone in the group dies) After begging them for a bit they finally tried to save them but only one could actually be saved. Now keep in mind they had a web cam, I watched the entire thing not being able to do anything. so I stayed up after work for 3 nights to talk to the remaining girls and to try to get them to drop this Death Chain thing. I got one to say she was done but the other 3 are quite persistent. The day I wrote the poem was the last of the 3 days I was awake and sleep really well, but I'm afraid that they did something while I was gone since I cant contact them any more. They were only about 14 for god sake! Its bad enough that they think life has no meaning except to bet on a stupid game with out the fact that it was the second time I've had to see blood in that manor. |
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Post by LadyWinterWolf on Jul 5, 2004 7:35:26 GMT -5
Ok...and you believed all that was real because they had.....a web cam.....and people don't do phony stuff on the internet at all.....right?
Sorry if I sound cynical, but I'm getting a bit tired of people saying, "pity poor me or I'm committing suicide"., especially when they say afterwards, "oh, I just wanted to get attention".
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Post by Loki3 on Jul 5, 2004 10:59:15 GMT -5
Without sounding heartless or mean.
I think there are 4 14 year old girls right now laughng there asses off at you my friend.
I highly doubt one would try to kill herself because she didnt get a picture of you. More likely they played a cruel joke on you.
Not only that, but since you are working I would take it you are an adult...... As an adult I would stay off web cams with 14 year old little girls.. no offense but it doesnt speak very highly when you post that especially when you also post...
Again no offense or inuendo is meant here other than to say that....
A. I think ya got played.
B. Stick to people your own age group.
C. Dont beleive everything you see on cams.
D. If you are that concerned, call the Wisconsin State Police. Tell them what happened and let them know the girls e-mails or screen names.
The WSP will be able to backward trace to them. However be prepared to answer some tough questions from them about WHY you are on cam with them.
Or the BEST advice I can give.
Stick to... B... C.... and stay away from 14 year olds on cams.
Sincere advice.
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Post by Loki3 on Jul 5, 2004 11:46:46 GMT -5
A few more comments in way of clarification.
I saw from your profile you are 17....... STAY AWAY from 14 year olds on the net. You are too old for them.
Sorry I call it as I see it.
Now as far as the upsetting episode you witnessed, like my previous post indicated... I think you got messed with by some kids, if you are so concerned over this I would advise call the police in this matter.
Seeing this is not a reason to stay up for 3 days, nor is it reason to have feelings of suicide. Frankly by calling the WSP (state police) you will do several things...
1. Ensure they stop this game IF it is a game.
2. If by some miniscule chance it is real you help them.
But also, we wary that they will not claim tht you were sexually harassing them, that is a crime, and frankly something that I think they would say if faced with there actions by the cops.
I have a 15 and 12 year old, and I can tell you kids do stupid things..... but along with that 4 14 year olds WILL COVER THERE BUTTS.....
So some even better advice to you.
1. Stay OFF CAMS with little girls.
That one simple thing will solve the issue finally and competely. You are 17 my friend...... you are frankly way too old for this kind of thing. Look for some nice 17 or 20 year old WOMEN....
ie: your own age group.
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Greghoul
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Post by Greghoul on Jul 5, 2004 12:32:17 GMT -5
to tell you the truth that makes me feel a bit better, thanks guys  and I wasnt trying to be whiny, I just needed to get that off my chest and see some one elses opinion on it its not so much the web cam thing that got me going, but it reminded me of a past experiance that I'd rather not discuss right now....... |
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