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Post by Bloodyaftertaste on Jun 25, 2004 15:35:03 GMT -5
K this is a place im gonna post all my poetry, It has some dark stuff in a lot of them, just warning ya, and i have a question about language? Is it acceptable or not?
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Post by Chahiero on Jun 25, 2004 15:37:42 GMT -5
Hmm, looking at the forum policies...
I don't see that it'd be a huge problem (if the poem is the one I think it is), but best to play safe.
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Post by Bloodyaftertaste on Jun 25, 2004 15:39:11 GMT -5
its the one in my sig that i have on kat's forum that she made for me, idn how they would take it if i posted it...
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Post by Chahiero on Jun 25, 2004 15:41:02 GMT -5
Like I said, best to play it safe. If you really want to know if it's okay I can run it by them and see if they approve :)
Don't let that stop you from posting your other poetry though. I love Fallen Angel.
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Post by Bloodyaftertaste on Jun 25, 2004 15:42:32 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Fallen Angel[/glow]
An Angel's fallen tonight
No more radient light
Darkness falls all around
As her broken body hits the ground
Her wings torn off by lust
With a man she thought she could trust
Glitter in her eyes turn to dust
As he walks away, is this just?
The red in her eyes reflect the blood
Her veins resemble a river to be unflood
An image burnt in her mind
Of something she can no longer find
So as she wipes the dirt from her knees
And sees that her clothes are bloodies
She stands up pretending to be strong
But nothing can stop the pain for who she longs
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Post by Bloodyaftertaste on Jun 25, 2004 15:43:21 GMT -5
ya i think fallen angel is my fav, since i did post it first and it has won some awards
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Post by Chahiero on Jun 25, 2004 15:44:10 GMT -5
Yeah, it's a really beautiful piece, and knowing a bit of you I can see the connection.
The imagery is really beautiful I think, beautiful but sad.
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Post by Bloodyaftertaste on Jun 25, 2004 15:50:18 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Fragile One[/glow]
I walked alone in the darkness
There was no love out there for me
I crept through the shadows
And avoided the light
My soul stopped exsisting to be
The air that I breathed
Was cold and still
The colors i saw were dull
My heart was frozen in my chest
And my brain, numb in my skull
That's when you held your hand out for me
Pulled me away from the shadows that sheltered me
And you said...
"Trust me oh so fragile one
I'm not here to hurt you
I can take you into the light
Once again
Trust me"
That's when I placed my hand into yours
The feel of my world began to change
Darkness pulled away
Light showed through
And at first it felt so strange
The glow hurt my eyes
And as my heart thawed
It began to bleed
But as the light grew in me
I found that this is a feeling I need
My hand still rested in yours, holding tight
You could tell that I'm still afraid, you held me closer
And you said...
"Trust me oh so fragile one
I'm not here to hurt you
I have taken you into the light
Once again
Trust me"
"Trust me...for I will not let go"
no that i read that again it reminds me of you Michael : )
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Post by Bloodyaftertaste on Jun 25, 2004 15:51:39 GMT -5
Yeah, it's a really beautiful piece, and knowing a bit of you I can see the connection. The imagery is really beautiful I think, beautiful but sad. thx i really am proud of that one |
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Post by Chahiero on Jun 25, 2004 15:52:37 GMT -5
On Fragile One - Yeah, it does kinda, though don't let that stop you from writing one for me if you want to. :)
(Side note: your AIM logged you off for some reason Lynn, probably messed up again)
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Post by Bloodyaftertaste on Jun 25, 2004 15:55:02 GMT -5
hmm you seem to be right about the aim thing, didnt notice, it still looks like im on, yet i cant do nething with it, let me try to fix that
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Post by Bloodyaftertaste on Jun 25, 2004 15:58:35 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Untitled[/glow]
Down in dark despair
Heavy cloud on the verge of tears
Lost vision in this deep smoke
But something shines in the distance
Reaching for it with blind eyes
Feeling its pull
Icy breath tingles on the surface
Something scratches to come out
It longs to go deeper
Free this battling demon
But something stills the pressure
A little shine of you
So the cloud drifts away
Warmth penetrates the surface
Where despair has failed
Though still slightly scarred
I have returned
:this one is dedicated to michael:
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Post by Chahiero on Jun 25, 2004 16:09:13 GMT -5
That's a beautiful poem :)
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Post by Bloodyaftertaste on Jun 25, 2004 16:09:44 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Masochist[/glow]
The darkness stowed away in you
Makes you do the things you do
But you never wish to cut me deep
Just enough for your love to seep
Down into my soul
Broken blood fills this hole
Cuz sometimes skin is too rough
Reaching me is tough
So I’m your damaged property
From the moment you put your hands on me
I can feel my life draining
But the truth is I’m only happy when it’s raining
You look into my eyes
As the pressure begins to rise
The blood runs down my skin
I can feel the love within
And when you bite into me
There is nothing more arousing
Then I dig my nails into you
And you feel it too
So I’m your damaged property
From the moment you put your hands on me
I can feel my life draining
But the truth is I’m only happy when it’s raining
[glow=red,2,300]Meant 2 Be?[/glow]
If there's a time in your life
When you wanna die
The tears pour out
All you can do is cry
Is it because all the *stuff* in your life
That you wanna reach for the knife?
Or is it cuz you were never meant to be
Did destiny make a huge error in history
Is it now trying to fix it's mistakes?
So once again you take
The knife off the table
And all you hope is to be able
To press down hard and drift away
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Post by Bloodyaftertaste on Jun 25, 2004 16:13:50 GMT -5
(double post)
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